I have been sorting through my documents and re-arranging things over the past little while. In the process I have come across a lot of half-finished thoughts and poems. Here’s a poem where I was clearly experimenting (and struggling) with a rythym scheme – and with using poetry to respond to news.
So far this summer, I have been really lucky and there hasn’t been much wild fire activity in my area, and very little smoke.

Zombie Fire
“it’s not uncommon for some fires to burn through the winter… usually… a couple dozen, not the 106… listed as active on New Year’s Day… the rain and snow didn’t come.”
- More than 100 wildfires still not considered out after B.C.’s record wildfire season – from The Canadian Press – Jan 16, 2024
The rain and snow didn’t come
but beetles and thieves meet
when will the secreted flames blossom?
After another scenario of drought the rivers unplumb
pick sides, bicker and argue, lay blame and repeat
the rain and snow didn’t come
This is not something that will easily succumb
deep smouldering thousand-year archives of peat
when will the secreted flames blossom?
Arguments are jettisoned when ashes darken sky, as a rule of thumb
then men and women bear on together for beast’s defeat
the rain and snow didn’t come
One by one, meter by meter, destroy this ravening, mad freedom
a trench warfare, an advance, a retreat
when will the secreted flame blossom?
Let it burn, let it cleanse, some say, allow life and death to compete
if the sins of our fathers must visit us, how long to clear the balance sheet
the rain and snow didn’t come
when will the secreted flame blossom?
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